breaking through slowly.

Mink,
all i can say is ¡WOW! Now i get the expression on your face when i asked you last class how the story came out, an inscrutable expression until i read this. I love it when writers flip from one extreme to another-- always a sign that creativity is hot and style is taking leaps forward. Your writing, aside from the father piece has been restrained, emotions and style muted, the tension throbbing beneath the surface, sometimes too much beneath so the reader can't experience. Now the tension has fully erupted onto the page. Technical pyromania. You show the firepower of your writing here and I'm impressed. Of course, I'm biased. I love this kind of writing.
- Prof. Ramjerdi