Thank you, Professor Ramjerdi

Mink-

Wow. This is publishable work. First step to success as a professional writer is to get published in leading lit. mags. I know some, but am not up-to-date on these as haven't sent out work for a long time, since I've been doing novels. Short story contests are also good things to enter. What are your academic/professional plans? Let's talk before semester ends and stay in touch. I'd like to be of any help I can. The lesbian content goes really well with what you've said you're doing in this story--> unraveling Korean girl expectations.
P.S. This scene is up there with father section of first story. Maybe you're writing a novel and that story and this one are parts of it. I think you should write this novel. I think it could succeed with a great publisher. Anyway, you are doing some great writing and should continue.

-Prof. Ramjerdi