multiple person perspective (literally)

Plot (created by me)

A teenage girl has locked herself in the bathroom to hide from the intruder that has entered her house. She has no means of communication and no visible weapons that she can use to protect herself. The intruder is ransacking the house and is unaware that someone is in the house with him.



Intruder (written by John)

After taking the family’s valuables, I fixed myself a snack. I ate potato chips, left over steak, and kimchee. There was no rice in the rice cooker. I washed it down with Soju. That was a kick ass snack. I’m gonna take a leak before I make my escape. I can’t help it. I begin to break down and cry. My conscience is getting to me. I’m unemployed, broke and living in a tent. I use to work at the fuckin’ factory. I gave them forty years of my life. As I try to push the bathroom door I hear a whimper.

“Is any body there?” I shouted.

There was no reply. I knocked again and shouted louder.

“I won’t hurt you. Please open up.





Teenage girl (written by Libertie)

Holy shit, holy shit….Think, quick, what am I gonna do? Where is my fucking cell phone? Did I tell mom I love her?

Oh my God, he’s coming! I’m gonna die…what if he rapes me?

He tries to open the door and I try not to make a sound.

“Is any body there?” he shouted.

I stayed silent. He tried the door again and shouted again

“Open up. I won’t hurt you”

I didn’t know what to do. I was trembling.

“ I am very flexible and have taken many self defense classes. Either you get out of here now or I am gonna open up a serious can of whoop ass on you” I shouted

“Sweetheart, I am not here to hurt you. Just come on out and lets talk” he said.

“Listen guy, Im no fucking idiot. You came here to rob my house and now want me to believe you’re not gonna hurt me.”



Intruder (written by Prof. Ramjerdi)

“Officer . . . what did you say your name was?”

“Officer Kimchee.”

“Kimchee? Really?”

“Really.”

“That’s so ironic. . . ”

“You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say may be used against you in a court of law . . . “

“. . . because it’s all because of the kimchee that this happened. . .”

“Roger, do you want to take this asshole’s statement or should I?”

“I’ll stay with the EMT guys.”

“ . . . ‘KIMCHEE KIMCHHEE KIMCHEE,' she kept screaming at me . . .my wife. I couldn’t take it anymore.
no job no kimchee she was going to leave me take the kids go back to Seoul a Korean with no kimchee is water buffalo with no balls I was desperate I didn’t know the girl was here I just wanted the kimchee the fridge was packed with it I knew it would be the guy’s a kimchee dealer Mama Lee’s Kimchi the hottest in the city I ate 5 jars I was starved I filled my backpack with 55 jars and then I had to take a dump because that’s the way it is with kimchee I tried to open the bathroom door that’s when she came at me the shower curtain rod who would think a little girl could be a samurai I had to defend my self Yes I confess I threw the bottles at her one after the other smashing against the bathroom walls shattering splashing kimchee all over walls mirror tiles skin she screamed her skin sizzling to raw bone bone powder and knobs Mama Lee’s Kimchee it’s the best."